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Chapter(s) in question.
Did the story hold your interest from the very beginning?
Was there a point at which you became less than excited about finding out what was going to happen next?
Could you relate to the main character? Did you feel her/his pain or excitement?
Did the setting pull you in, and did the descriptions seem vivid and real to you?
Does it feel believable?
Is there anything that confused you or you feel needs further explanation?
Did you notice any discrepancies or inconsistencies in time sequences, places, character details, etc.?
Did you notice any obvious, repeating grammatical, spelling, punctuation or capitalization errors?
As a reader, what disturbed the flow of the reading experience?
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